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Saturday, November 20, 2010

Forever

Promise me
you'll never die.
Promise
you'll stay young and strong.
Promise me
we'll be like this
together here
Forever.

And if you won't promise
then hold me tight
we'll close our eyes
imagine strong
and make this moment
last
Forever
instead.

5 comments:

Sun inside Rain said...

Nicely put.

(Any surprise that the word for word verification is commit?)

smb said...

there's always imagination

very nice

Brochi said...

Wow! On so many levels...

Soul Comfort said...

To whom are you speaking in this poem?

David_on_the_Lake said...

amazing..

truly